Translator: Boil Water
Proofreader: Salt the Water
Redrawer: Add Pasta
Typesetter: Stir and Test Pasta
Quality Checker: Drain Water from Pasta

I was browsing my favorite tags "poor grammar" when I spotted this, so I decided why the heck not. Got bored midway though, so didn't bother with any quality checks, so there may be some mistakes here and there.

Pasta Sauce: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1154100/17e215fdc0/

Without desperate gasp for air, I think the author doesn't know how drowning works. It's an unconscious process and people get weakened after some oxygen deprivation. Not orgasm, LOL. But if that's how it works in that universe, I think I might consider moving in. Trying to get myself out-of-breath during a morning run will be a new form of perversion.

Base +13, Krazylec +6

Swimsuits? Check.
Full Color? Check.
Repeatedly Drowning Cute Girls? Che- wait hold the fuck up
Guess that's just the author's thing. I sure can't beat my dick to it though.

Base +6

@feathered Well according to Wikipedia, the most reliable source on the internet: "Author John Curra wrote, "The carotid arteries (on either side of the neck) carry oxygen-rich blood from the heart to the brain. When these are compressed, as in strangulation or hanging, the sudden loss of oxygen to the brain and the accumulation of carbon dioxide can increase feelings of giddiness, lightheadedness, and pleasure, all of which will heighten masturbatory sensations."

Author George Shuman describes the effect as such, "When the brain is deprived of oxygen, it induces a lucid, semi-hallucinogenic state called hypoxia. Combined with orgasm, the rush is said to be no less powerful than cocaine, and highly addictive.

So there ya go. (Don't try this at home kids)

Base +2