Hey guys, this is my first time doing this kind of thing so any kind of feedback is appreciated !

Now that I've mostly gone through much of the process of cleaning, translating, typesetting... I have a newfound respect for other people that graciously do this.

Well anyway, even though I'm not a fan of Love Live, I've decided to translate this doujin mostly because I like the art and also because I've been learning japanese for quite some time now and wanted to give it a go. Feel free to point out any errors I've made and drop some tips if you have some.

I may try my hand on the sequel if this one is well received.
I hope you'll enjoy reading it !

Raw used : http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1293477/8449efddd8/

You did well!!! The English is good, reads easy and no mistakes. Maybe you could have added a dash in all-boy school, but that's a matter of taste more than grammar. I love this story by the way. She immediately takes charge, and seduces the boy that she wants. Girl Power!

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thanks for the chapter ,clean ok fonts ok redraws ok , really good editor

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thank you!!!

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You made it! I'd say I realized some improper points in my Chinese translation by looking through your work. Thanks for sharing.

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Great work and I hope you'll translate the sequel as well.

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