Chaper one (english) : http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/902944/0dcf837291/

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English is certainly better and make more sense than the first translation, though there's some part that isn't very accurate either if it's based from the Raw.
I didn't check every translation but here's a few example (in some part, her correct name is Yurie with an "e" while her nickname called by some other is just Yuri):

-page 6
"I'm so glad I came" => "Woah, she came!"

-page 8
the little note about the cup size and inches => it says just she has a big breast complex

-Page 14
"Finally, this is it", "I came back...", "my class..." => "I'm finally back..." "...Or rather, unfortunately I'm back..." "To my own classroom...!!"
"Feeling good yet?♥" => The word in the raw actually means that it's someone enjoying someone else unfortunate situation/misfortune. So maybe the most common line "Serves you right♥".

-Page 19
"I am sorry for crying, I should stop...", "It's okay, I'm fine." => In fact, it's the boys who are speaking here. "She's crying so much that I feel sorry for her... We should stop...", "Y-You're right... I had enough too..."

-Page 20
"Are you being bullied?" => "You're making us look as if we're bullying you, see?"

-Page 23
"She leaked" => "She's still leaking!"
"So embarassing" => "I... look/feel... so miserable..."
"Well done" => "Wipe here too", she meant her shoes BTW.

Base +7, eelguy +6

First: Center align text.
Second: Use a better font like Wild Words or Architects Daughter.
Third: Don't bother doing this if you don't have a proper translation to work from.

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i hope chapter 3 will come one day.

Base +23, eelguy +6

I did this for myself because there was no English translation at the time. I only uploaded it here now because the other English translation seemed worse than mine was. I didn't want it to be the only English version available. I don't know Japanese, I never expected it to it to be perfect.

I was looking into fonts, I was more focused on having an English version than the font, so I didn't chose Wild Words or something.

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