Another translation, as always i hope my Enlgish doen't lead you to suicide, recently i discover this artist and his style reminds me Samurai's works

What do you prefer, should I keep writing Sensei or change it to Professor or Teacher?

i read all the comments and opinions

RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1271241/c29569bdea/

I prefer Sensei, but it's not a big deal, it really comes down to personal preference.

Edit: "Is", not "It's". You make that mistake too often. It's readable, but you should get a native English speaker to check your grammar, if it's possible. In the end though, it's good enough that these CG sets are being translated, and the grammar mistakes aren't too big of a deal. I've seen far worse, lol.

Edit2: Also, commas.

Edit3: You don't need to include the Nontext files in a translation. But don't worry about removing them at this point, I don't think the system will allow you to.

Last edited on 11 March 2019, 06:45 UTC.

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@Drksrpnt
The first thing I do not understand is why you put that link when in the page 71 it's the raw xD

I have asked several people and every time it turns out that their native language is my native language, I dont have luck, for the next CG I will try to do it even better, thanks for the advice!

Edit: no, the system don't allow me to do that, but this confused me, at first I add the RAW and nobody complained, but in the last CG of P Herb I didn't add the RAW and someone got upset and said that he wanted the RAW, I don't know what to do

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Thank you for upload it. I really appreciate your translate.

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god bless translator,more titania!

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@nkaR
Drksrpnt put this link because it's more respectful to cite your sources.
Moreover, page 71-134 aren't "the raw". Those pages don't have any text and are really useful for editing purpose.

Edit: Drksrpnt already mentioned quite a lot of details so I will try to complete the list:
- Don't forget to put a dot at the end of the sentences (you can also replace a dot with an exclamation mark depending of the tone of the sentence).
- Watch out for the spacing between each line of text.
- Try to use different fonts for different purpose. Dialogues, moans, ... etc.
- Try to not simply left-align your text.

Last edited on 11 March 2019, 11:04 UTC.

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Maybe translate the sound effect too, if you can.

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