My first time translating, typesetting, etc. So any and all criticism is both warranted and appreciated.
Even if it's just "you suck." :P

Anywho, this was a rough one for my first time, I must say. A lot of references to the mythology and true history
behind Minamoto No Yorimitsu. Of course only JPWikipedia had the info I needed, which was fun.

Complaining aside, I had some fun doing this (even with some frustration), so I look forward to doing more.

Be sure to follow/contact me @GogtafTL on twitter to make requests. I won't be charging for them (any time soon, at least), so fire away and I'll get to work.

Thank ya kindly!

The first page reminded me of that old webcomic of the dude drawing Princess Peach's eyes. You know the one.

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Pretty good first go at editing and font choice. I defer to others on the quality of the translation.

And you avoided the currently trending pitfall of using the resampled archive images.

Thanks for the upload.

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You did really good on this for your first time, Gogtaf!
I hope to see more like this from you in the future!
I really love what I see here!
It's never been to translated good Mama Raikou doujins!
Gudao, you lucky bastard...

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How I love hentai logic: You want to know about me? First, here's my naked body.

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@IND3Xfr5ut: I don't think that logic is actually far fetched in this case. Sex is a very intimate encounter and is an experience about learning your partner's body. Fully exploring their body, you get to see how they physically and emotionally react to the most personal form of physical contact. You get to know a whole new side of that person, one that many people will never experience.

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