Good job, pls keep on~

Base +4, sporzem +12, Super-hujan86 +24, a19437857 +8, The_Howling_Wolf +5, Eisenblume +6, Blue Man +6

not surprised than her revenge includes everypony than helps Rarity...
(only end the story pal!)
Edit: please, is only my opinion, because a lot of stories around ANY fandom tends to not finish, even is the change of interest, not reaction about the story or the dissapear of the writter, this story has been keep for a year, more less, so is in the limbo of end or not

and now is a crybaby...

Last edited on 29 November 2018, 19:46 UTC.

Base +11, The_Howling_Wolf +5, sporzem -12, Blue_Wizard -6, Blue Man +6

Rip Van Sprinkle? Really? I would have kept on snoozing too, that was weak.

Base +6, sporzem +12, The_Howling_Wolf +5

Are you really trying to tell us that in all the rush they forgot to look inside of Raritys House IF Rarity is still in her home??? WTF?!

Base +6, The_Howling_Wolf +5, C.Edouard +7, hoigoigoi +19, CorruptedNerd669 +7

Art is pretty good, but the writing is just horrible.

Base +6, DeronRav +7, shizn0id +7, observer1980 +21, Yadic +4

So... Spike stay in ponyville to check the punisment of Rarity?

Base +7, sporzem +12

I admire the artist's dedication to the story, but the writing is horrible.

Seriously, we don't need to see what the other characters are doing in Manehattan. Watching them scramble in the beginning was fine for a story introduction, but all the story cuts are shitting all over the pacing of the story. The story was about Rarity. The story is about Rarity. The story should focus on Rarity.

Base +9, Yadic +4, Blue_Wizard +6, shizn0id +7, PornFilter +4, Link128 -9, onenightes +6, sporzem -12

Jeeeesus Christ stick to the spanking for the love of God.

Base +6, hoigoigoi +19, shizn0id +7, Eisenblume +6, sporzem -12

A stabbing machine with needles? Seriously? Do we need to give this a guro tag? Cause thats literally what a machine like that would do.

Base +9, shizn0id +7, Eisenblume -6, sporzem -12

It this doesn't get Spike laid, I don't know what will...

Base +6, Blue Man +6

Gets spanked in butt with needles, needles come out the top of butt.

Enjoy your hospital stay Rarity!

Base +9

so why all the theater for that dress?

Base +11

GUAAAAAAUUU! This result to be actually pretty enjoyble, i dont expect to be reading this comic so much. So... I was right, spike actually stay in poniville to check the punishment of Rarity.

Base +7, Blue_Wizard -6, hoigoigoi +19

the fact that Discord is the mastermind behind Rarity's punishments... sounds pretty forced like that film with the devil into an elevator... "Devil"

Base +6

What glass of water? I dont recall any.

Base +6, dwharlow +6