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They look alike, they should be blood related.

Base +18, person107 -6, Ryan WolF Thepram +12

Might as well make the best of a bad situation and fuck your brother I always sqys

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Wow you really gonna post right up to the cliffhanger? dude

Base +5, Gabs999 +6

Well that escalated quickly!

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way too quick. if they took more time with the teasing it would be way hotter.

Base +6, The Archivist +9

This looks pretty promising.

Page 9 needs to be fixed tho, it's low res.

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@nigger0 ok i think i did fix it, im not really sure and is not easy to check this on the phone

@tooshyforthis yeah sorry for that but i'll kep'em coming as soon as they get posted

and the rest of u guys do please tell me if any other is low res so i can fix them (if i can)

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really lovin this so far. Keep up the great work :)

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Language is categorized as "Japanese", the whole thing is in English though. Can someone edit that?

Lovely comic, can't wait for things to get hot :-)!

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But don't you know, Hoigoigoi, if we say they're actual siblings instead of step siblings then normies get their panties in a wad.

Damn, can't wait for the rest of this, probably needs to be tagged as Ongoing or WIP

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Way too fast.

Base +6, The Archivist +9, Zo22y +6, lolman42 -6

Nothing wrong with speed if it plays a plot point. Perhaps there's a reason she's so into him, and clearly he feels fine with fapping to her.

I don't mind a story of a couple of horny siblings having a go at it.

Base +6, lolman42 +6

Without reading and only looking at the thumbnails - 2 Stars

After reading - I agree with Tempjr. Though it is true you can throw out any semblance of plot structure in hentai and porn (Look at Mister Ploxy), an author is still trying to achieve 'something' at the end of the day. It feels like Ounpaduia was trying for character development at the same he is trying to get it out of the way. You could give him the benefit of the doubt and chalk up the 180 in mood on pages 12 - 18 to teenage hormones, family situation, etc etc. Yet it feels more like he skipped a good few panels and dialogue to... I mean I don't think she is going to turn into a succubus or something like that. They're step siblings. That is the fetish. The point has been established. Let's expedite the fucking.

But the problem is that without extended plot points what you see in the thumbnails is exactly what you get, a couple of awkward fucking teens. 2 Stars

Base +14, lolman42 -6, adagio_ -3

page 19 looks like a tentacle/blob monster

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The innocent eye are turning my dick to steel!!

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Page 22-23: "Beautiful morning with you".

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