Any input, correction, or recommendation are most welcome!

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"Haha, You are captured, stupid SENSEI!"

Great job on the TL and typesetting. Loved the story, too. A busty, cute, older sensei with her hair in a ponytail is just perfect

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@CyborgSamurai

it's not ntr at all, it's more like cheating, she enjoys to be fucked by everyone, but in the end (end chapter) she really stays with the boy, whom she's married with.

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@Coffedrug

More like a slut does what a slut does... also, a spoiler there, mate.

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@ Coffedrug

I guess I am a little relieved then. Slightly better then expected.

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Would this count as netorase, even though she didn't know at all that the guy was recording everything?

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"She likes sexual intercourse in wives"
She. Likes. Wives.

Curse you for getting me excited for nothing.

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Smh, everybody knows you have to wait a few minutes after someone leaves to ensure they're actually gone, thereby preventing embarrassing situations from arising should they happen to come back. This is like rule #1 when it comes to stealth fapping/fucking/anything really.

Edit: what a slut lmao

Last edited on 08 June 2018, 16:30 UTC.

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deep deakfantasty

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Thanks to the above comment i know not to continue, sigh.

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Arthur fist

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Guess I'm not reading the sequel then

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You can see it in her slutty face that she doesn't even care about the poor schmuck she's "married" to. A whore like her is probably only thinking about the next cock she can get inside her. I feel sorry for the poor lad.

Still a good fap though.

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@
Sweet Breaker
Sorry to say this to you, but the lad actually is a pervert too, people are really sensitive to spoilers, so I'm just going to say, he's everything but a poor lad.

Last edited on 08 June 2018, 05:51 UTC.

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@Einhar

Didn't expect that Path of Exile refereence and thank you for TL.

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Has this been hidden? When searching for it I'm not finding it. Already had a tab with it open, which is why I can comment.

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Pretty good, but you definitely need to work on your editing.

Here's a few errors I spotted:

Page 6: The word 'quiet' is misspelled in the first speech bubble as 'quite.'

Page 28: Word missing in center-bottom panel, second bubble. Should be, "Even if YOU won't tell me his name..."

Page 35: Second and third speech bubbles have very awkward phrasing that sounds unnatural.

Page 44: Third speech bubble has grammatical error. The word 'happen' should be 'happens.'

Page 44: Fourth bubble has awkward phrasing.

Even so, I look forward to seeing more. Keep up the hard work!

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I don't see the appeal in characters this slutty.

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