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English is not my first language, so if you see any error in any text please tell me how to write it correctly so I can fix it, thanks.

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Ladyhips huh...

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love the art work, totally gave me a boner

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So glad the series continue ^_^

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Awesome, thanks a lot :)

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Fuck, what a tease

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Where are these guys getting these female asses from?

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a rare shemale story that isn't a 3d abomination

hopefully the cute trap gets a boobjob like the megatit shemale

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This shemale is katrina from the 2 sides comic?

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It's not an issue about not speaking English, it's an issue of not having a proofreader. I've seen this artist for a while now, and they even have a patreaon, how can they not have anyone to translate this stuff proper? There's not even a paragraph of text in all of this stuff, I'd gladly do it for free since. Heck, you don't even need to actually speak Spanish to correct all of this stuff. I meself might try to contact the author at this point.

Last edited on 15 June 2018, 09:15 UTC.

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扶扶扶扶他?

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@thekiller2413: While I do see the flaws in the script here, offering to be a proofreader after misspelling "Patreon", using a comma instead of a semicolon in "....Patreon; how can...", ending the third sentence on "since" with nothing to follow it, and spelling "myself" as "meself" is a bit... how should I put it... hypocritical.

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@Lord Dashwood Oh, m'Lord Dashwood, you dig it deep! I was quite drunk when I wrote that, I must admit. I messed up the spelling of Patreon and I have no clue why I'd put "since" at the end of that sentence, besides the fact I had several others going on in my mind that overran each other. And I don't know anything about using semicolons! But I utterly object to your objection of the word "meself", since, as a non-native English speaker, it took me some years to learn how to type in a more natural way. Years of raw exposure to the internet and their denizens, can you fathom!? Sometimes writing an expression that is not entirely grammatically correct makes more sense, I believe.

Alas,I did not convey such information at first, but the truth is that I'm from Brazil and I have more than a passing understanding of Spanish. I can easily see what the author wanted to express in their native language and how it got so utterly botched in this translation. What I meant, and this was originally typed as an answer to a comment that has been buried, is that even if you don't understand the original language you can easily correct some of the mistakes there with a passing knowledge of English. You're right about the hypocritical remark though, since I have not contacted the author at all as I mentioned.

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