Realease #2

Any input, correction, or recommendation are most welcome!

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"Haha, You are captured, stupid SENSEI!"

Great job on the TL and typesetting. Loved the story, too. A busty, cute, older sensei with her hair in a ponytail is just perfect

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@Coffedrug

More like a slut does what a slut does... also, a spoiler there, mate.

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@ Coffedrug

I guess I am a little relieved then. Slightly better then expected.

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Would this count as netorase, even though she didn't know at all that the guy was recording everything?

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"She likes sexual intercourse in wives"
She. Likes. Wives.

Curse you for getting me excited for nothing.

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Smh, everybody knows you have to wait a few minutes after someone leaves to ensure they're actually gone, thereby preventing embarrassing situations from arising should they happen to come back. This is like rule #1 when it comes to stealth fapping/fucking/anything really.

Edit: what a slut lmao

Last edited on 08 June 2018, 16:30.

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deep deakfantasty

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Thanks to the above comment i know not to continue, sigh.

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Arthur fist

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Guess I'm not reading the sequel then

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You can see it in her slutty face that she doesn't even care about the poor schmuck she's "married" to. A whore like her is probably only thinking about the next cock she can get inside her. I feel sorry for the poor lad.

Still a good fap though.

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@
Sweet Breaker
Sorry to say this to you, but the lad actually is a pervert too, people are really sensitive to spoilers, so I'm just going to say, he's everything but a poor lad.

Last edited on 08 June 2018, 05:51.

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@Einhar

Didn't expect that Path of Exile refereence and thank you for TL.

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Has this been hidden? When searching for it I'm not finding it. Already had a tab with it open, which is why I can comment.

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Pretty good, but you definitely need to work on your editing.

Here's a few errors I spotted:

Page 6: The word 'quiet' is misspelled in the first speech bubble as 'quite.'

Page 28: Word missing in center-bottom panel, second bubble. Should be, "Even if YOU won't tell me his name..."

Page 35: Second and third speech bubbles have very awkward phrasing that sounds unnatural.

Page 44: Third speech bubble has grammatical error. The word 'happen' should be 'happens.'

Page 44: Fourth bubble has awkward phrasing.

Even so, I look forward to seeing more. Keep up the hard work!

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I don't see the appeal in characters this slutty.

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THESE

HOES

AIN'T

LOYAL

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What part of this is "sole_male"?

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