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[Hirno] Shinshoku Inkan | Erosion zone (Seigi no Heroine Kangoku File Vol. 3) [English] [Kimochi-san] [Digital]

[Hirno] 侵触淫姦 (正義のヒロイン姦獄ファイル Vol.3) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2018-03-31 23:03
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Posted on 31 March 2018, 23:03 UTC by:   Kimochi-san     PM
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back at it again translating Hirno work.
I wish Hirno-sensei make more of these tentacle stuff :<

anyway, hope you enjoy.
Posted on 01 April 2018, 00:08 UTC by:   SuperGenericAnon     PM
Score +72
18 tags under female
20 pages
Oh boy, it's going to be one of THOSE hentai.
Posted on 01 April 2018, 00:21 UTC by:   MightyHonks     PM
Score +158
Getting a proofreader is super important, broski.
Posted on 01 April 2018, 00:33 UTC by:   Vilnius     PM
Score +55
The English could definitely use some work.

Dear translators, if your first language isn't English, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE get a native speaker to proofread for you.
Posted on 01 April 2018, 02:08 UTC by:   Faeldrin     PM
Score +123
To be fair, native speakers are usually the first ones to accept dumb mistakes like "should of been" or confuse stuff like "their/they're" (happens in French too). Being native is more of an advantage when judging the flow of the conversation or the choice of words IMO.

But yeah, this would benefit from a bit of proofreading. Especially all those plurals missing an "s".
Posted on 01 April 2018, 11:14 UTC by:   giftz     PM
Score +16
@Faeldrin
Plurals missing an "s"? I figured out where they went. ---> Page 11 "NOT MY BOOB'S" .... I got you, bro. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

(Also in other assorted "boob's" throughout the doujin)

Page 13/14. It's funny how quickly she goes from "OH NO I GOTTA GET AWAY" to seconds later "I just realized I want that cock... Screw the mission!" I mean I guess it's because of what he came inside of her just then, but damn that's pretty fast acting, lol.

Anyway, jokes aside, thanks for your work on the translation, Kimochi-san. It's a pretty nice Hirno work and at the very least it will now be much easier to get out a finished product for this if wanted.

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