Hello everyone I would like to announce that I have a kickstarter for my another project im working on called shattered pleasures, me and Pottedplant another DA and artist is working with me on this series.

The First two pages were made by artist ArtByZora.

The story: Xing Zhi a banished deity from the celestial world was imprisoned for 1000 yrs on earth within the yellow river for his misdeeds against his own kind and humanity itself for bringing demonic lust bound creatures into the world. Now after a construction accident he has been freed from his prison and the whole world is his playground again but a group called Extermas is a anti monster unit that tracts down magical or monster like horrors in the world and tries to stop them from trying to control the world or destroy it. Will they be able to stop Xing Zhi and his demonic horde from causing chaos!?

This comic is a Action/Horror comic that will involve vore,sex, and violence. More volumes are to be expected but only if the patreon

https://viid.me/9Mrdp

I'm confused how that can be worth 1200$, on Kick starter of all PLACES! and how this is uhm. i don't understand this.

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Jesus Christ this is horrifying.

>This comic is a Action/Horror comic

Ahahaha, yeah sure buddy. Come on, you're not fooling anyone. This is a porn comic with some horror themes. This shit is gonna get removed from kickstarter I'm pretty fucking sure.

EDIT: Well I guess patreon is better than kickstarter, but dude? You aren't even close to good enough to deserve to be paid for your fetish art. No one should have to pay for sub-mediocre drawings of mutant MLP characters assimilating furry chicks. And holy shit, you want 100 bucks a month to make this? God damn son, that's some audacious shit right there. Maybe 20 bucks a month. And fuck, you say 100 bucks to just make the FIRST CHAPTER? What do you think you're gonna do, sell this shit at Comiket?

Also, don't fucking shill your stuff on here. I'm gonna assume you didn't realize since you seem to most likely be a teenager, but no one wants to that shit here, don't do it. Oh, and make sure you don't put your real name and city on your weird fucked up fetish porn projects, James Bean of Paris, Kentucky.

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The third image is sort of small there man. Do you have a bigger version?

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Just make a damn patreon already don't kickstart this stuff man.

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$1200 for this, are you fucking mad?!

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I have NO issues with the fetish.
I have NO issues with the idea of paying for comics.
I have NO issues with KickStarter.

but the fact that you went to KICKSTARTER means you don't understand how reality works. you have 50$ pledged of 1200$ and have 19 days left to get the money.
5 backers pledged 10 bucks so far, your NOT gonna get the money, you know this right? kickstarter isn't the place to go to fund comics, patreon is.

I genuinely feel bad for you, but why not just use PATREON? you get paid monthly and can just produce your comics for everyone to enjoy :) I'ts a win win for everyone involved. the creator the customers and the public.

PS. I'm not trying to hate or be an ass, it just frustrates me because i liked and fapped to this little bit.
I want this to succeed and be a full comic but knowing it wont and it's because you didn't market it right is what pisses me off.

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So we have The Thing taking the form of Princess Celestia and is running around absorbing Furries? K, got it.

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oh my god. you actually took our advice and apologized? i feel bad now for being so critical >.<
that's really mature and cool of you.

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The problem is not the money you ask, the problem is that you think you are going to get money for this, much more talented, experienced and famous artists barely pass the $100 barrier what makes you think you and your buddy will even reach half of that?

Well that and that shilling in this place is not very welcomed, this is the worst possible place to ask for money or criticism.

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One criticism I'd offer is first impressions are key. The title pic, the thumbnail alone is enough to get you downvoted to all hell on this site. No one will even give your drawings a chance if the first image isn't the most interesting thing ever. That's advice that applies to a lot of things actually...

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For $1200 I'd spend that on some art courses and come back and draw a 24 page comic that'd definitely come out better than this mess

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If we pay double, will you not draw this Comic ?
Or at least use the Money and visit an Shrink, you´ve got Problems.

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A patreon for a gallery with just 5 pages? Disgusting.

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This is one of the scariest things on the site.

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You need jesus, bro.

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You know that feeling you get when you kinda vaguely feel like you're being watched or just that something's super off and you get a full-body shudder through all your muscles?

That just happened to me because of your creepy-ass cover. So thanks for making that a thing whenever I search the tags on this.

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Ah here come the NIGHTMARES

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If you don't like it, don't buy it. But jesus is 1200 waaaay too much. This artist is greedy and as such is gonna fail. No worries.

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Why don't you take the Scott Cawthon route and just go full horror.

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This is disgusting

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Wow This is fuck up .

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Allow me to add my 10 cents,the dude knows his drawings are the stuff of nightmares,god only knows how many ppl youve given nightmares too. But you've got guts to post this stuff here. I hope someone gets a kick out of your art,ill only drop in to see what other horrors are created, its honestly like watching tales from the crypt lol

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Pre-puke saliva fetish, is that a thing now?

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I am here for comments.

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I'd rather read a Laruffi translation than this Horse-Shit!

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https://ouo.io/sG88Bn

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totally shit

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How do we vote to delete this shit? Mostly the advertising but also because its pure trash

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I think page 3/Shattered pleasure 1 needs a re-upload to a bigger size. It's pretty tiny.

Edit: If you have the original file, trying changing the resolution and then export it.

And if it's because of the site then cut and paste the panels and put the images going down vertically instead of horizontal.

Last edited on 25 September 2017, 00:46 UTC.

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This is supposed to be porn I think. I think.

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Someone wants money for this? i feel like i should be paid just to read this

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It isn't even the fact that this is "horror" that it deserves to just be abandoned. It is that it is shoddily drawn regardless of what it is trying to be.

Go to school, practice, learn how to draw, then start looking for money once you have something to actually sell. Come back when you have the talent to actually draw whatever the hell it is you're going for here. It isn't gross or scary. It's just pathetic.

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This is why we can't have nice things

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You want 1200$ for this smut?

Amano Taiki could maybe coax me outta 100$

For you I wouldn't throw a fucking dime.

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#4 is unbirthing?

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I actually GET the fetish and i still find this abhorrent.

This site could use a little more filtration

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When you can't even get a depraved pigman like me a stiffy; that probably means this is not your calling. All this proves is this site needs an album ignore feature so when a user doesn't like a work they can just never have to see it again when searching for things to jerk it to.

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The fact that this gallery has a half-star and that your Patreon only has $49 pledged as of the writing of this post should tell you that this is not the website to undertake this endeavour on.

Please stop advertising your Patreon on this site.

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No! I don't want that!

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Let me start by saying this ain't quite my cup of tea but if there's one positive thing about it is that it's original. How many times have I read comics that were copies of other comics? I don't know how you managed to reach your Patreon goal(s) ( over 150 bucks/month at the moment is quite an achievement, I believe ) but congratulations on that. I admire your guts and perseverance because I'm sure it's not easy to gather fans when you make very specific art like this that doesn't appeal to the masses. People will try to bring you down and call you all sorts of things. We have some examples right here. As for the art itself I don't personally like it but there's something original as I've said. I don't see the porn in this to be honest ( so yes I question its presence here ) but there's a meme-ish feel to it. I'd recommend spending more time on each drawings. Adding colors would definitely be a plus. An actual story would be nice.

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WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU BRUTALLY MURDER THE WILLING CHARACTER WVERYONE UNPRINTS ON??? My boner HAS NEVER BEEN SO HARSHLY RUINED

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Getting real tired of this popping up every time it updates.

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It seemed like it almost fit a sort of assimilation fetish, which I can get down with, but as soon as it gets to the good part where someone actively offers to join them, it becomes a nightmare fuel vore thing. For me personally, the transformation aspect loses its appeal when the receiver of the transformation becomes a mummified husk, but I'm sure that's just someone else's fetish.

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Welp time to filter this pure trash, always pops up in my fucking searches

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This comic is rad.

I think that panel 16 is the strongest one in the series. Its such a fucking crazy tonal shift, and the fourth panel on page 16 is incredible.

You made a bit of a misstep in asking for so much money for it... But that's all it is, a financial mistake. The comic itself is amazingly original, and super creative. I think that you have some balls for making something so out there, and I really admire that.

You got a lot of negative feedback, but please don't let that discourage you from continuing to create.

The very fact that you inspired such a visceral reaction from so many people shows that you have something really special here.

Even if you don't finish this comic, please continue to create!

Believe in yourself!

I do. :)

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You know, maybe you can see this as a chance to reinvent yourself. Relearn the basics, really focus on you studies, try new styles and try different things. Sure this didn't work, at all, but maybe you can refind yourself another way.
Plus not to mention there isn't shame in finding a new calling. Not everyone is an artist, maybe there's something you'd be better at.

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This reminds me of one of those 70s drug cartoons that was popular back then. Not saying it's a bad thing, just that is my first impression when looking through this. As for charging for continued work on it...I don't know...I think not charging anything, and having it strictly donation based in a better idea, and a way to attract a lot less hate. The point is, for this comic, given the negative publicity it has received, I think only continuing as a passion project would be the best way to turn things away. Just be "hey, here's something I'm working on, and if you like it, float me a few dollars, and if not, then at least toss me some feedback."

I like this comic, but only for the novelty of bringing me something I really haven't seen that many times before, so if my words sound like I'm condemning you with faint praise, apologies in advance. Keep working on this, but only because you want to, otherwise the resentment may show through your work.

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We have strayed so far

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