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@kadabra123

"Are you going to suck me off?" is indeed somewhat awkward and too literal in this context, but your translation is just downright wrong. How did you even get 'learn' from "してくれるんですか"? The line is supposed to convey his surprise at the fact that she's doing it at all, not her skill.

And her line about politeness isn't aimed at his comment, but rather his way of speaking in Japanese (more polite/formal speech 敬語).

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Miyabi is truly a top-tier artist
Also considering he/she uses several different art styles for his/her works is beyond amazing...

Last edited on 19 July 2017, 22:22 UTC.

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@Hakrei

Miyabi is male, not she. His twitter.. http://viid.me/9Mw50

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@Chichai mahousukai

Sorry, I'm retarded and mixed up しって and して. "to know to give ~= learn." Maybe that's wrong too though. Thanks for pointing out my mistakes. The keigo one makes sense too, I'm just an idiot.

I'm still shit at the language, everyone else can rest easy knowing I won't be translating and ruining any works.

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https://www.doujinshi.org/book/788632/

RAW - http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/819033/1aa9ffe793/
Chinese Translation - http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/855865/004c6b18aa/
Chinese Translation - http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/953163/faf434ada0/
Korean Translation - http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/962206/7c65d0a5ab/

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Ah, the body switch fakeout at the end there. I kinda wish they actually stayed swapped.

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@kadabra123

Hey, don't blame yourself so hard. There is a lot of work to translate and few people that take time to do it so you should be proud for all your work. Japanese is hard and the best way to become better at it is to do translations. Please, don't give up so easily ! Just be aware of your errors for the next one and remember that, on internet, the majority of people who see your work and like it doesn't take time to leave a comment ^^

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Personally the 5th story/ chapter was the best!

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