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Raico-If

Free Hentai Western Gallery: Raico-If
Posted:2017-07-03 23:26
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:Japanese  
File Size:2.80 MB
Length:26 pages
Favorited:31 times
Rating:
18
Average: 4.62

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Posted on 04 July 2017, 00:30 UTC by:   dman69     PM
Score +7
This is ambitious, I'll say that much but personally not my style.
Posted on 04 July 2017, 01:33 UTC by:   Asura_Otutsuki     PM
Score +9
Honestly? I don't really know what to say. The reason for Time Traveling could've been done better; sure it was powerful enough to draw some emotions from me but not by a lot. The magic is there but the plot doesn't exactly 'bring it out' completely. Good work though.
Posted on 04 July 2017, 01:56 UTC by:   funkwolf     PM
Score +13
I think Asura hit the nail on the head for a lot of good fanfics.

The talent is growing, but the experience isn't where it needs to be just yet.
Posted on 04 July 2017, 02:16 UTC by:   Xenan9881     PM
Score +14
I agree. It is a decent little read but nothing like Between Friends or even Shipping War AU levels if engaging.

It is nice on a casual level. I happened upon this on /co/ myself and decided to share.
Posted on 04 July 2017, 04:23 UTC by:   Cgmf07     PM
Score +6
pta q sad :'v

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