Translation by JustHereForThePics. (I think)
Re-edited by me.

What changed? Well, I invite you to do a page-by-page comparison and you will see.
If anyone has corrections, recommendations or constructive criticism do not hesitate to contact me.

Have a nice day.

Edit: Thanks Slobber, bigp0weR, JustHereForThePics, pixivHHH and ZVBN67 , it's fixed.
Sorry for these unpleasantness.

That is a extremely lewd witch.

Base +6, Miriah +7, Vodoka +6, bennystar124 +5, PangDe +28

"Unending erection" is a symptom?
No, my fellow gentemen, thats a blessing... as this hot work too.
Thanks.

Base +23, gentleman01 +6, the missing link +9, Nuclearmy +12, takeshi.dono +11, davivico +6, Miriah +7, gotee +6, Sephye +5, rotar zairo +9, airhead +11, Banshee233 +2, Ost666 +6, and 15 more...

re edits are always cool, thanks. This is such a good comic

Base +6, Konola +7

Part magisa.
Part of me wish that there is more other character then!

Base +10, anaxagoras +6

@piyin until your penis is out of oxygen and you lose control over your erections!

Base +6

alternate edit (ENG): http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1042603/0bbed62dd3/
RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1033755/2febdc245b/

p37 should be "...end up" at top right, i believe?

yay for keeping the same resolution as the RAW and cleaning the edges =)

Base +30, MechWarriorNY +8, Machiga +7, Megaton +25, Vanilla Cream +5, DattacK +7, airhead +11, Banshee233 +2

EXTRA THICK!!!!!!!!!

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@piyin "Unending erection" is not a fiction. It may sound funny at first, but it is supposed be really unpleasent after a while and needs medical treatment (at least if you want to keep your penis)

Base +3, Kenosaiki +7, UnknowDestroyer +7, Konola +7, finnick8 +7, MechWarriorNY +8, Soldier A +6, elaxor +6, TheRokyando +5, magness +6, Sylphar +4

I was missing Kuro no Miki nice and thick bodies.

Some data

School of thick hot bodies:
Takeda Hiromitsu
Sanagi Torajirou
Kuro no Miki

Otochichi
Yunioshi
Neromashin

Fue
Fei
Fuetakishi
Shirono Mahiro

School of plumpy hot bodies:
Mustang-R
Erect Sawaru
Hiroyuki Andou
Taihei Tengoku
Sawada Daisuke

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Can we have a T H I C C tag ?

Stellar work, thanks for sharing !

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pg 25 should be "thighs" instead of "thights" right? bottom of the page
also on pg 36 "Dawn it" instead of "Damn it"
also on pg 37 "I'm culming" instead of "cumming"
I didn't notice anything else wrong
either way thanks so much for the re-edit!!

Base +7, PinguPrin +4, Megaton +25, Shigure3 -10

If with Magisa things are like this, with Narmaya I'm going to cum blood.

Base +8, rotar zairo +9, tokin +8, Kinogassa +6, Kenzaki Kazuma +18

>no anal

you can't make this shit up

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bottom of page 22 should be "single drop of semen left" not "single drop of semen lefy"
bottom of page 45 says "suden" instead of "sudden"

Base +5, Shigure3 +10

can i have the carmelina part already?

Base +6, Legojack +9

kuro no miki - hentai master!

Base +4

@Lolimaster you are missing Goban in that list

Base +7, Palaxius +33, MechWarriorNY +8

"Unending erection" is actually a disease, and it's called priapism. I'd lay out the symptoms too if it weren't literally boner-killing.

Base +7, melancholica +6, Konola +7, PetersPark +7

p.8: "What cagliostro told us was..." - Captilize 'c' in Cagliostro
p.9: "Isn't it hilarous?!" - 'hilarious'
p.11: "It was for you sake." - 'your'
p.13: "This male fragance is wonderful." - 'fragrance'
"With this sheated dick..." - 'sheathed'
p.45: "Your tightened up all of a sudden...!" - 'You'
p.50: "my first night with magisa came to a close." - Capitalize 'm' in Magisa

Base +8, kasshoku +4, TheRokyando +5

Excellent work and artist

Base +1

@Lolimaster kanzuhiro, kanzume, meme50 and ponchi.

Base +6

Great work! Get a proofreader next time instead of crowdsourcing it!
p.27 "Savor his lewd..." -> "Savor this lewd ..."
p.33 "pushing trough my..." -> "pushing through my..."

Base +6, crazymagic +12, anomahous +9

hahahahahahaha omg the number of updates for this 1 gallery. jesus christ lol

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When your page by page comparison goes wrong.

Base +6, azumaheroyuki +9, SinnedDevil +5

Christ. I have never felt an urge to get up and order a physical copy of a doujin halfway through the fap. Not sure how I missed it with all those updates but this shit is by far my favorite from this winter's comiket.

Base +6, Lolimir +7

Unending semen, that's pretty much goddamn immortality. Not that it'd mean anything different in H world, he will still use it to have sex.

Base +9

p.18 "As you are know," -> "As you are now"

Before she got cut off, she was trying to say that Gran seems like he's up to the task of banging all of his nurses.

Base +6

Magisa the brestest

Base +8, MO FA SHI +4, Banshee233 +2

Great,求汉化

Base +4

Finally a title pun!!
First time I read was Gran's Boob Fantasy - Magisa Part... XD hope there's Narmaya Part lololol THICC

Base +7, kuroshi-san +9

Re-re-re-re-re-re-up.
Is this allowed??

Base +21, fadefade +15, DDude8 +14, goni09 +7, Guardsman40k +4, S-pan +7, MattUzumaki +9, The_Devian +9, necrosis527 +10, FastRabbit -13

Haha tell me when it's final. First time i've seen a gallery being updated this much.

Base +7, azrin +7, The_Devian +9, Frenzyhero +6

I don't mind the reedits personally, it's nice that people care for their work. And no one is forced to re-dl anyway.

p.14 Now that should I do, → Now what should I do,

Not sure about this one:
p.21 It feels different than your mouth → from your mouth
I know it's correct but it doesn't sound natural to me.

And if you really want to bother, you're supposed to cut syllabs between double consonants when you can (impres-sive p.4, clog-ged p.18, lot-tery p.52). You got the other half right so maybe was it just inattention.

Also on p.47 top-left, does the sfx have another meaning than... armpits?

@CgKaleb: it's great to see such heartfelt (dickfelt?) gratitude. :D Props to you Sir.
As for my favorite I can't tell at this point. C91 has been unprecedently mindblowing (dickblowing too I guess). Maybe Sasamori Tomoe, which also happens to be missing from Lolimaster's listing.
Ah wait no, silly me, it's this .

Last edited on 07 June 2017, 21:59 UTC.

Base +6, Kara-King +6

@sanjogahara: No, in fact multiple re-uploads with minor changes is against the posting guidelines and could be a reason for expunging (since one could be doing it to "bump" the gallery to get GP) .

- Excessive updates to or "bumping" of galleries must be avoided. "Excessive" should generally be interpreted as more than twice per month.

Base +15, crazymagic +12, The_Devian +9, necrosis527 +10

@JukanX Man, where was this rule during the "banana cream cake" debacle

Base +6, Banshee233 +2