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3Diddly I love how you've written Hannah, she's a smart girl and in the long run she wasn't coerced or brainwashed she chose Orlov. I like Orlov as well.

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@TheBettyMonster

Haha i think you are naive. Hannah isnt really smart. Orlov is smart. Do you believe he didnt recognized that Hannah tried to change him? But he didnt want to change. Instead he used it aganst her to really fall for him. And now she choosed a life of obidience. Orlorv dont love her. He wanted to own her whole and now he has achieved that. Not though pain or money. He played her all the time. He startet with Pain and such stuff so Hannah played along to avoid any pain. After that he startet to be nice to her so she would sooner or later start to like him. He even sent Mark a video with this black guy. This way Mark would get her back for a short time. All this was planned from Orlov and Hannah fell for it pretty easy. Orlov even said it himself in this chapter at the start. About love and so. He cut the love between Mark and Hannah And he wants a women who is completes his for service without any rights or so. Like he said a slut which will do anything he says. So yeah it was a brainwash over a long time, because that is how brainwashing works. I mean its your opinion and i respect that but still i cant understand how someone can ike Orlov. In my eyes he is a total asshole. After all he did at least he could be more nice and so to her. But he didnt because he dont really love her. He just wanted a bitch and he has one.
For Mark ok he made a mistake but he should forgett Hannah. Maybe travel far away and start a new life. Fighting for her is impossible since a long time. He should just divorce and let it behind him. Otherwise it will only more pain for him.

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@Southpower
I agree with you and I want to add
Orlov = 3Diddles. without godmod all this would be impossible. (In the sense, only thanks to the author this happened)
@3 Diddles
It would have been more fun if Hannah's Corruption Chapter 11 ended on happyend. And all the obvious truth to disclose in Chapter 12, for the history of it would be better.
It is difficult to imagine how you can develop a story, it looks like a logical end

P.S. Sorry for bad english

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@n_e_x_u_s:

Yeah and i saw chapter 13. And when it continues like i thinki then Mark will suffer the biggest pain i can imagine to be true. I wont spoiler anything but i can only say 3Diddles please dont do that. Mark suffered enough. The End of Chapter 12 was hard enough but when it goes on like i think then that is too much in my eyes. Find an end without any more pain for anyone. Leave Mark alone. The Netorare Story is already complete dont turn it into a mind torture or guro for Mark.

And by the way i saw screenshots of your game Katies corruption. And i saw Orlov in it. Is it possible that this game spoilers the end of Hannas Corruption?

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So I've read it all up to this point, and I want to comment but I hardly know where to start. For one thing, I feel like this story should have been concluded a few chapters ago. It went from exciting to just dragging out needlessly at this point.

I expected a bad end from the start. It was fun to see her slowly degenerate and become better and better trained as a loyal sex slave and eventually get pregnant. That was all obviously coming. The fun of the story is to watch it all happen, and you know it's a one way trip. She won't be coming back from this. But a little while back the story kind of shifted gears. The tone changed, she suddenly grew an independent personality. She stopped being a sex slave and has now just turned into an unfaithful cheating wife. With that, the story is just kind of "blah" now.

Mark has been an obnoxiously annoying character since about Chapter 2. The whole story would have been better if he had been doing anything other than constantly have nervous breakdowns about his wife. He could have been masturbating to the videos. He could have been seeing other women. He could have gotten involved in something really crazy and ended up dead or in Jail, thus cutting off Hannah's last connection to her old life. Or, if he really cares THAT much about his wife, he could have stepped up and acted like a man. Grow a pair and tell Orlov to fuck off and give his wife back. But no, Mark does nothing worthwhile, good or bad. It's no wonder readers want a happy ending, because they probably just want Mark to stop sucking and actually achieve something.

Orlov isn't much better. He made for a good villain at the start, but he needed to go away at some point. Now the story just feels like it's all about him. Like he is the Hero or something. He has all of the victories. He is a mobster and an unlikable fat bastard. I feel like he should have been killed off by rival gangsters about half way through the story. Hannah could have been moved to serving a new master who trains her differently. Maybe they are nicer, or maybe more stricter and abusive.

This is going to be a lame ending if it just ends up the way it's going now, with Hannah marrying this fat bastard. But it would also be lame if she just went back to Mark at this point. His dumb ass deserves to be choked more than he deserves to get her back.

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Hi guys, I just wanted to say that sort of development is typical for a netorare story. Some people find it very erotic, while others find it depressing and enraging. Unfortunately, that is how it is. The reason why I put the note in the last chapter is for those who don't want to see a bad ending to stop reading. The story will continue on as I planned it. This will be the last time I comment on this topic. Thanks for reading.

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@3 Diddly
Thank's man, now I know what "netorare" means, and I will not repeat the mistake )).

P.S. From the first chapter, it became clear to me that there would be no happy end.

Last edited on 20 April 2017, 17:06 UTC.

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