This is a fan translation work I've done from the Japanese version of "Touhou ga KanColle ni NTR!?" into a translated English one.

I don't know much about Touhou and KanColle so there might be somethings that are not translated in the best of the terms I could've used.

Either ways this was a easy rank C translation Bounty anyone could've done, but no one done it so I gave it a try.

Is this supposed to be a joke on how Kancolle is catching up to Touhou in terms of fandom?

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> I don't know much about Touhou and KanColle so there might be somethings that are not translated in the best of the terms I could've used.

Well I can probably comment on the touhou stuff.

p3, you translated "touhou police" as east police... once.

p4 and beyond, I assume "sprite" is "yousei", 妖精, which is normally translated as "fairy". ghosts and spirits are probably also specific terms in universe; you could try plugging in the kanji to the wiki: https://ouo.io/UNOCRJ (although things like 幽霊=phantom is a lot less established than "fairy")

I'm assuming "captain general" is some kantai thing, but I can't hazard a guess as to what.

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Thank you and the fact I translated east police instead is because of the one I translated as "east police" was writen in kanji and then the one I did "Touhou Police" was because it was writen in hiragana and I attempted to express it using that but yeah you are right about the sprite being not appropriate for this, I was trying to find the right word for it but couldn't find it.

About "captain general" I'm probably reffering to Admiral or commodore.

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I mean, you could've at least Googled "manga translation" and follow one of the 1000 tutorials for beginners...

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Okay thank you I will take your suggestion the next time!

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Thanks for the latest work from this artist, but there's still more out there that we want to see as well.

Can we expect that here soon?

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While I thank you for the translation, I must assume English is not your native language, am I right? If you plan to do more translations, please consider getting a native to check your translations because this one is difficult to read.

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I suggest using punctuation

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Definitely could use some work but I'm thankful that this at least has translation.

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